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crusaderky
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 Last replied to on Wed Mar 08, 2006 18:22:55
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cool, I wrote EVERYTHING down and then when I posted it I got "you haven't got permission to post in this forum". The "Back" button didnt work. 
all lost..... aaaugh.
As requested, I'm doing QC on ch. 18 and 19. Then MrDummy will decide if it's necessary to re-release them.
reposting by memory.
119: missing credits for QC for v2 
120: 'kay
122: repetition: "the stand I used to use to boost" -> "the stand I normally used to boost"
126: "the front of Kashiwagi's panties was bulging" (subject is the front, not the panties)
whole chapter: annoying lowercase 'w' font.
whole chapter: lots of white & black spots, dirt marks, and some page cracks. I originally marked them down one by one, but all went lost 
IMHO, the only problem that could justify a re-release is the 'w' font. The decision is up to you.
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Posted at Fri Feb 10, 2006 07:49:21
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That is session problem, i think. Sessions have shorter life than cookie.
I advice you write first in notepad program if you want write long story.
But i know what you mean. Ok, i shall check ch 19 again, but after release chapter 21.
Same for chapter 18.
En indeed, change font, the w is the problem in both previous chapters.
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Posted at Fri Feb 10, 2006 11:26:38
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That is session problem, i think. Sessions have shorter life than cookie. |
session_start() is done using a cookie, actually, and it should last as long as the browser window is open (unless you've done something really weird to your code) 
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Posted at Fri Feb 10, 2006 12:08:51
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session_start() is done using a cookie, actually, and it should last as long as the browser window is open (unless you've done something really weird to your code) |
If the code is good programmed, cookie check must completed before the access start. I shall verify the code and test it. But we are here for chapter 19 Please post the problems in another subforum
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Posted at Fri Mar 03, 2006 22:33:45
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p126: "It looked like the front of Kashawagi's panties were bulging . . ."
I think the number agreement here should be between "front" and the verb, so it should be "was" instead of "were."
p133: "It's that Mako-chan?"
I'm guessing this should be, "Is that Mako-chan?"
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Posted at Wed Mar 08, 2006 14:21:09
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126: when he's in a swimsuit -> when in swimsuit
In the original it doesn't say either "he" nor "she", so let's not disambiguate it.
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Posted at Wed Mar 08, 2006 18:22:55
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Japanese has a bad habit of dropping pronouns - sometimes it's necessary to add them to the English.
Also remember that at this point, Tamami believes Mako is male.
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