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mrdummy
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 Last replied to on Mon Jul 03, 2006 23:25:52
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Finally, after long time, i have time to place chapter 27 online.
It's one of the hottest chapters.
Good luck, translators.
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Posted at Thu Jun 22, 2006 20:08:15
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"hot" is an euphemism 
waiting for green light from boke...
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Posted at Sat Jun 24, 2006 04:32:04
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okay.
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Posted at Mon Jun 26, 2006 00:08:53
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BnFnT_v4_ch27_p145:
"She turned away..." - Nigerareta:
逃: escape; flee; evade
Change to "She ran away..."
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Posted at Fri Jun 30, 2006 04:13:44
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p121: "But when" -> "But if"
I think this fits better.
"put a big move on her"
Sounds a little strange, maybe something like, "really put the moves on her?"
p123: "it would be fine you to take"
Insert "for" or "if," i.e., "fine if you."
"But when you put in your fingers or a vibrator, make sure to get her all wet..."
Perhaps, "But before you put in your fingers or a vibrator, make sure she's wet..."
I thought it was interesting how this chapter changed Kana from comic relief to more of a real character.
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Posted at Mon Jul 03, 2006 22:46:21
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121: "If I'm really what you want" -> "who you want" would make better sense. waiting for boke opinion.
122: "But when she's not a virgin, sometimes you have to put a big move on her" -> "But if she's not a virgin, you may have to put a big move on her"
127: (not translation related) WTF is a ぬ with nigori???
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Posted at Mon Jul 03, 2006 23:25:52
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BnFnT_v4_ch27_p145:
"She turned away..." - Nigerareta:
逃: escape; flee; evade
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